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• Edward's included in football team, as originally put on paper
• In the writer's own words completely - organisation cleaned up the galley
• Not ready for publication
• Organisation cleaned up the galley, the way the writer left it
• Tune died out, in need of revising
• Not having been polished by daily?
• One includes copy of subsequent two letters, as originally written
• University and institute in need of a first draft perhaps
• Ignoring bloomers, nude out of shape requiring change of diet
• Without improvement, varying sea level rises into crumbling dune
• Not yet proofread
• Full of typos, say
• Not yet corrected for publication
• University study about diet strangely not corrected
• University and old institute in need of a first draft perhaps