Related Clues:

• Revised copy
• Polished, as a paper
• Changed the language of?
• Blue-pencilled
• Improved a manuscript or novel
• Minced words, say
• Enjoyed Independent: emerged with no content corrected
• Censored on TV
• Cut short, perhaps
• Improved, hopefully
• Not the same computers carried by men?
• Edward I, meeting another Edward, getting changed
• What's reflected in bidet I deftly polished
• Minced words?
• Made less wordy, maybe