Possible Clues:

• Sorely in need of editing
• Fond of using paragraphs when a sentence will do
• Drawn-out remark at end of July
• Excessively descriptive
• Needing editing
• Circumlocutory
• Like this clue, which is unnecessarily verbose and could be way more succinct than it is
• Like “a majority of,” relative to “most”
• Far from terse
• Longwinded